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I.Opening
Nowadays, there are many young people who choose to live far away from home. While living independently causes you many problems and difficulties, it also brings you many experiences which is necessary for your future life. This essay will tell you about some advantages and disadvantages living far away from home brings.



II.Body
1.Disadvantages
Topic sentence: There are many disadvantages of living alone.
- Living away from home requires more money to pay for everything which you don’t need when living with parents.
+ rent a flat/ house/ …
+ pay for everything in daily life (foods, electricity, … )
- You have to face up to many problems which rarely appear when you live at home and solve them by yourself.
+ in friendship
+ in relationship with rental house’s owner
+ homesick
+ when having household appliances broken
- Sometimes, parents can’t control their children’ life.
+ timetable
+ friends and social relationships.
+ healthy, regimen
+ another problems (studying, spending,…)

2.Advantages
Topic sentence: However, being alone’s advantages are very useful for you.
- You can get your space, your freedom and no need to depend on your parents.
+ you can stay up and get up late
+ you can cook and eat what you like whenever you want
+ you can invite your friends to your place
+ you can go out without asking permission
+…
- You can get many useful living experiences.
+ you learn how to organize your own life
+ you learn how to find the solution for every problems in daily life by yourself.
+ you learn how to plan your whole day.
+ you have to do everything by yourself (cooking, washing, cleaning,…).
+ you learn how to spend money logically and reasonablely
+ …
- Independent life makes you become more self-confident, self-sufficient.
+ It creates for you your own life style
+ It makes you more dynamic, raise your sense of initiative
+ It also helps you improve your knowledge
+ It helps you get responsibility for yourself
+ …



III. Conclusion
In conclusion,personally I fully believe that living far away from home is a great opportunity for you to enhancing your living skills and join your own life. It’s indispensable that you have to face up to many difficulties, but I’m sure that it’s the best way for you to become a mature person. It will be so interesting and exciting when leaving parents’ care.
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